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burning inside by ~laguna-loire:iconlaguna-loire:

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Lost inside this heartless shell
Tears flow as they pass
An acing sorrow follows me
Watching you leave is painful
Another cry of a dying soul
Spirits die before the angel
Take my life away
Take it far beyond my reach
For fill my destiny for me
I will wonder alone
Trough the dark of loneliness
My love for u isn’t dying
Tearing me away from inside
Don’t leave me be
Come closer so I can feel you
Let me see the world
Trough your eyes
I tried to see it trough my eyes
Can’t see clearly
Tears to find from inside
My look is like stone
Give me a sweet emotion
For see that what must be done
Slipping slowly away
Into the unknown
Reaching the perfect reach
To find only emptiness
And the river of love flows
©2005-2009 ~laguna-loire
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well i just wrote this last night, i was pretty down at the moment and a good vriend of mine she tolt me to write down what i felt and this is a small bit of what i felt.
im depressed at the moment but i will be okay i geuss

don't know what you all will think of it but i just velt like sharing it so enjoy
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=Scorching-Angel:iconScorching-Angel: Nov 12, 2005, 9:37:01 AM
Oh honey.... you make me cry again.... Whats wrong? Tell me please, you can mail me if you like
Love you ever so much
:cuddle: :love:

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Let no joyful voice be heard! Let no man look up at the sky with hope! And let this day be cursed by we who ready to wake... the Kraken! - My husband's favourite line! :heart: Davy Jones :heart:
~laguna-loire:iconlaguna-loire: Nov 12, 2005, 2:59:15 PM
its just that i was depressed when i wrote this and also my love for nejla i go tit bad not good
love ya :cuddle: :hug:

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"Welcome to the worst Horror of them all... Reality!"

"if pandora is once more to open the box.......Call me!"
~bloodybeautyjen:iconbloodybeautyjen: Nov 12, 2005, 4:49:40 PM
i love the line "come closer so i can feel you". sad poem but good

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Starving for permeation-A reason to breathe, to blink, to become...
~laguna-loire:iconlaguna-loire: Nov 13, 2005, 3:09:56 AM
thank you
i just wrote how i felt thats the point of it
it's not really a poem but more some of my feeling rabbeling out load but thx that you love it

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"Welcome to the worst Horror of them all... Reality!"

"if pandora is once more to open the box.......Call me!"
=Scorching-Angel:iconScorching-Angel: Nov 13, 2005, 7:43:11 AM
Isn't she responding to you or what? (and remember i'll always be there for ya hon!)
love ya too :cuddle: :love:

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Let no joyful voice be heard! Let no man look up at the sky with hope! And let this day be cursed by we who ready to wake... the Kraken! - My husband's favourite line! :heart: Davy Jones :heart:
~Berinc:iconBerinc: Nov 19, 2005, 5:28:58 AM
Its so nice but kinda sad in the same time too !!
Hope u feel better soon, if ur sad :hug:
~laguna-loire:iconlaguna-loire: Nov 20, 2005, 3:02:52 AM
thx hun i feel much beter today but you know that if you read my journal :hug: hope to see ya soon on msn k love ya

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"Welcome to the worst Horror of them all... Reality!"

"if pandora is once more to open the box.......Call me!"
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